
Getting tired am I, not old man tired, though there
is cause for it, no – white Wadjela tired, tired of my
words just being cast to the wind, no longer paper
tied, just out there on whatever breezes, a world
of verse populated by writers seated at the base of
empty flagpoles.
These days poetry editors are still wrapped in figurative
nappies, no sense of literary traditions, largely unread,
brought up with lie back entertainment from first
consciousness, multi coloured Fisher Price plastic mobiles,
shapes that twirl and make noises when touched, prodded,
experiential nightmares that are suspended above them,
in their cots, no time for human contact, laughing and
giggling, word formation, same as the poems that arrive
on-line, no art to find the mind’s construction in careful
calligraphy, these are not crafted, grafted, just formed as
interesting typography, emblematic designs, with no real
connection with forbears of literature, poems just drift
across their screens, disassociations that pass for poesy.
Words, phrases and images that carry with them links,
associations and reference to Joyce, Eliot, Plath, Dylan
boozing Thomas et al, crafted connections for the
aficionados to revel in, note, be entertained by, simply
pass them by in their sheltered cocoons, and so the
pomes come and go the way of heaped soft plastic, once
something with a purpose when it could be recycled, now
with the surfeit of modern poems en route to landfills,
no-one reaching into the heap to save or resurrect some
poetic insights.
I am tired of editors who cannot distinguish between
graceful imagery and stirring rhythms, between the Waste
Land and this wasted land, the latter being pushed heap
on heap above the Yamuna, near Delhi. The river drowning
in its new layers of detritus. Competitions spawn poetry
submissions from all and sundry, those with Masters [mastery]
and Doctorates [doctoring] come bearing writing learned and
crafted in academia, no sturm und drang here, just formulaic
poesy shaped and shunted to pass creative writing degrees.
Sonnet [5:7:5]
five syllables here
created as literature
but meaningless stuff You have mastered the rubric, now for your doctorate
Is life’s struggle no longer the motivation, something
from Romanticism, Paris ghetto, bar, café, poverty,
breaking baguettes with those who had tasted bitterness,
smelt the bent and broken tubes of paint, the wolf at
the door, fingers too cold to press the keys of the old
Remington, writers guiding ships that would pass in
the night or in smoke filled rooms exchanging life’s
forces.
I am too old to live with these disconnected
five finger fantasies on keyboard and screen,
prefer watching clouds pass on the sky above
the cliffs, those poems bearing blood and grime,
shadows of lived experience, not these works that,
like unwanted presents, stuff from Aldi, creeping towards
the tip of dead bones of would-be poetry, being forgotten,
adding nothing to the corpus of those who brought
language to life, Middle English, Greek and Latin, Norman
imagery, traditions bearing rhythm, rhyme, echoing
speech patterns woven with subtle understanding.
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